Rarely would i critique a piece of literature, or even read it. For my schedule is quite tight, and first impact is always my priority, yet your piece changed that. It hooked me the moment I read the title. It's fresh, simple, and thoughtful. I loved the flirting in the conversation and the fu...

Colors: The colors are very well chosen. A bit more color contrast would've popped out the bird. Maybe you could use the complementary color of the bird for his eye (blue, green?) To add intensity to his expression. Composition: Great composition, the flow lines lead you right to his face and...